The ONLY THING I could suggest is, instead of suddenly cutting to the next scene of her self-pleasure, are transitioning cuts. It might be my OCD, but I don't like seeing a hand teleport from tit to mouth.
Other that that it's perfect : Sexy, well-animated, no typical-anime-hentai-dub-I-stole-online BS, some damn good length and quality to it too.
First off, the fuck is slenderman doing in the top left.
Secondly, IS THAT FUCKER DABBING IN THE TOP RIGHT ?
The plot seems... "Interesting".
The animation is good... Albeit takes 3 to 4 minutes to load past the intro...
Overall good design, just not my thing, but I'll give credit where it's due.
But why does the screen tint white for so long. It takes straight up minutes to pass from scene to scene.
I respect that,I don't expect this flash to appeal to a wide range of people.
The prolonged white transition shouldn't be happening. The transition is 10 frames long - about a third of a second. I don't know what could be causing that.On e621 I've had the issue of the "Skip intro" button not functioning while it worked for everybody else.
I was about to say that it was nice seeing Dave and Zone-Tan getting along better...
But then the sex tape was brought up...
OH WHY DID IT GET BROUGHT UP ?!
WHY COULDN'T YOU LEAVE IT AT GOOD ENOUGH ?
"Okay, looks like a minimalistic animation with a climax. Let's see what the arrow does."
"WHAT THE FUUUUUUCK MAN !"
I'M A GIRRAFE !!!!!
A macbook running windows 10 ?
I can only give you 4 cause of that...
I'm gonna guess there'll be a gif of Pixen or Tera getting pounded by a 14-inch didlo ?
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